Strengths: The layout is very good and the photo is very effective and
links in with the layout
Areas of improvement: maybe add more photos and fill out
some of the gaps
But overall I don’t think there is much you can improve on
and it is very good
Strengths: I like the layout and the colours used, it's neatly set out.
Improvement: Maybe another picture or two could be added to show what else is included in the magazine.
Other Comments: Overall, it looks professional and has a continuous house style, which shows that it's consistent. I also like the logo and the colour scheme.
Strengths: I like the layout and the way the photo is the main focus.
improvement: I like the simplicity but maybe link the picture and text for example I would try making the 'every month' the same colour as her hair.
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