New magazine draft combined

From my peer feedback I decided to merge two of the magazine drafts I did together and used features from both to make a new magazine draft.

Feedback on one cover

Peer views:
Peer 1-
Postive- Good Main Image.
Negative- Could do with a banner at the bottom
Peer 2-
Postive- I love it its great and looks very proffesional
Negative- The main article in it could be less toned down and not have as much writing.
Peer 3-
Positive- Great image
Negative- Make some font more obvious and some less.

Focus Group

This is my focus group which i carried out about 2 random chosen students favourite magazine.

4 First edits for magazine

Digital mockups using photoshop

This is my digital mock up for the front cover. If this was my real front cover there would need to be a lot of improvements to be made. An important conventional feature i forgot to put on the cover was other articles like cover lines. This is important to making my won sucessful magazine.

Drawn mock of front page

Chaning hair colour

I decided to copy off this photo with the hair and changed my models on photoshop.